In the dead silence of the empty, abyssal blackness it is utterly impossible to even attempt to comprehend a concept of the self. 'You' are nothing more than a subatomic particle, utterly devoid of all senses, floating eternally through the unfathomably vast seas of the Cosmos. After a trillion Eons of inexistence, a solitary star comes into view. 'You' begin to come into existence upon discovering the sense of sight.

1. I attempt to navigate my weightless, unknown form towards the distant star.
2. I am transfixed by the light and overcome with awe - Primitive emotions awaken.
3. I am so insignificant and formless that I continue drifting, unphased.
4. I realise that I am creating my reality and begin willing stars into existence.

By Alundra

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